Open Question: can anyone grammar check this sentence?

Open Question: can anyone grammar check this sentence?
I, Brandie M. Campbell, hereby write this letter to the Jackson Friend of the Court stating that my Mother, Jeanie Ray Johnson, has Power over Attorney over me with regards to petitioning the Court for Social Security payments and Health Care from Michael E. Campbell, and for Social Security and health benefits. I acknowledge that I’m still in school and over the age of 18, and am willing provide proof for that.
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Resolved Question: What would cause Ketoacidosis in a non-diabetic person?
NOT starvation. I have several health issues, and am currently doing some research into some of the more serious things that have happened to me medically in the past three years. About three years ago I was feeling sort of run down and tired. I thought I was just bummed out about my husband heading out to sea. I went to bed early one night, and woke up at seven the next morning feeling extremely confused and sick to my stomach. I began vomiting, and by three that afternoon my breathing was sort of shallow, and I was so weak I couldn't walk. I called a neighbor who brought me to the emergency room. I ended up passing out and having a seizure according to one nurse, another nurse just says I passed out. (The hospital is trying to cover up a mistake they made. They tried to release me after one IV and some anti-nausea medication, but I passed out in the waiting room before I could even call a cab). Anyways, I was later admitted to the hospital in a severe state of ketoacidosis. I guess my blood and urine were testing at the highest possible level for ketones. After three days of IV treatment, and specialized diet, they got my ketones down to level two, and discharged me. I had to pee on keto-sticks for a month to make sure that the levels stayed down, and they eventually went away. I was looking over the hospital records and the official diagnoses was, "Anorexia and bullemia leading to an incidence of starvation induced ketoacidosis." I am neither anorexic, nor bullemic. Yes, I was throwing up that day, but I woke UP sick. I'd eaten just fine the day before, and days prior. My kidney values were out of whack, they said due to severe dehydration. I haven't had an incidence since, but I do have days when I feel somewhat like I did that day. I am careful to drink A LOT of water, or I get deyhdrated. I also eat every couple of hours so I don't feel weak and dizzy. I am just so aggravated. It doesn't make sense to me that I could wake up with some sort of "bug" at seven, and by three in the afternoon be that far into a ketone ridden state!
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Resolved Question: A new Beethoven video? this is something unbelievable...?
I want to find one video. According to Beethoven's biography: Beethoven lived the last years of his life amost completely alone because of his deafness. He only would get in touch with other people by more-than-18-years-old chats. His illness was getting worse each time. His feet filled of a strange liquid, and he was thirsty very often. He had terrible stomachaches too. One day a doctor went to Beethoven's house and he extracted a lot of blood and bile from Beethovens's body. Some people says that after that, the doctor opened a cosmetics factory. When the Beethoven's health state was spread on Vienna, it was raining. There is a large story about Beethoven's death, but the only real thing that is conserved nowadays, is a video record in which Beethoven was blowing the candles of his first birthday. More than 4 persons went to his funeral..... ______________________ If you already read that.. could you answer my question please? DO YOU KNOW WHERE COULD I SEE THE VIDEO OF BEETHOVEN'S FIRST BIRTHDAY? I'd really love I could see it! Thanks for your answers!
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